In Its Grip

She was irresistible Lust had me in its grip. Tempered though somewhat, When she produced the whip. "What is this I said, What is this game you're playing." "You'll know soon enough, said she For you are for a flaying." I couldn't make a run for it I'd let her tie me to the bed, As she began to crack the whip My heart fair filled with dread. But several lashes later How could I have known, I really rather liked it, My 'interest' had grown. Entry for Sexy Poetry Contest Sponsored by Lewis Raynes. 18/11/18. Placed 2nd.

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Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 11/29/2018 3:37:00 AM

Very nicely done, Gary - hearty congratulations on your win in Lewis' contest - blessings and good day to you, Friend! :-)

Gary Smith
Date: 11/29/2018 5:34:00 AM

Thank you Gregory. :)

Eve Roper

Date: 11/26/2018 10:59:00 PM

Gary, congratulations on your win... Nicely done

Gary Smith
Date: 11/27/2018 5:09:00 AM

Thank you Eve. :)

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 11/26/2018 1:30:00 PM

Such an 'interesting' piece, congratulations on your win!

Gary Smith
Date: 11/26/2018 1:50:00 PM

Thank you Michelle. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/26/2018 12:19:00 AM

- Congratulations on your "Sexy Contest" poem, Gary :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Smith
Date: 11/26/2018 2:15:00 AM

Thank you Anne-Lise. :)

Line Gauthier

Date: 11/25/2018 11:18:00 PM

LOL Congrats on your podium finish, Gary. Love your poem.

Gary Smith
Date: 11/26/2018 2:15:00 AM

Thank you Line. :)

Caycay Jennings

Date: 11/18/2018 7:37:00 PM

Oh-what to do with this? I mostly comment on poems, not possible 'facts' in them (exceptions exist.) I wonder if Ann Landers or Ms. Manners covered this situation? How would they advise me on: after reading this, can I still look him in the eye? I laughed reading his poem, but is it okay to laugh if this is sexy to him, is that rude? I want to share concern about his sitting ability, but may learn it hurts in a good way & how would I respond to that? Oh, Gary, what a good time I had .. CayCay

Gary Smith
Date: 11/19/2018 2:07:00 AM

Thank you CayCay, :)

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 11/18/2018 5:42:00 PM

G'day Gary … crikey! Be careful, although it does sound like fun - thanks Gary - Lindsay

Gary Smith
Date: 11/18/2018 5:52:00 PM

Thank you Lindsay, a bit of a laugh. :)