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From feigned blind darkness that falls into night Where no heart could beat in a cheerful rhyme As all dreams lay lost to such hopeless fright Let one spark stay lit with the fire of time With fervent prayer that hope brings into sight Your love and peace forever framed in light. 01/23/2017

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Date: 3/16/2017 12:20:00 AM
An uplifting gem. I love this, it is what inspires and twinkles with light to guide our way. Beautiful writing :-) I have a stone with 'Hope' carved on it..your poem has the same talisman feel. a special fave, 7+ blessings, lynn
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Date: 1/28/2017 11:45:00 AM
YOu did a wonderful job here, Charlie. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 1/28/2017 1:49:00 PM
Thank you Ms. Dietrich...
Date: 1/25/2017 11:08:00 PM
A 7 for this beautiful poem, Charlie! Janice
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Date: 1/25/2017 11:11:00 PM
Thanks so much Janice...
Date: 1/24/2017 12:09:00 PM
what an uplifting ending to your poem :-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx7
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Date: 1/24/2017 12:13:00 PM
So very kind of you Jan, thank you...
Date: 1/24/2017 10:15:00 AM
An inspiring spark ... a nice read ...
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Date: 1/24/2017 11:19:00 AM
Thank you Probir...
Date: 1/24/2017 5:59:00 AM
Amazingly beautiful painting within poetry's frame! A seven my friend, Charlie!
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Date: 1/24/2017 11:19:00 AM
Thank you Demetrios...
Date: 1/23/2017 10:44:00 PM
That is a frame I'd like to have... Excellent
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Date: 1/23/2017 10:49:00 PM
Me too, thanks Tim...
Date: 1/23/2017 3:06:00 PM
Spectacular write, Charlie, beautiful rhyme, should do well! a7
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Date: 1/23/2017 8:24:00 PM
You are very kind John, thank you...
Date: 1/23/2017 2:23:00 PM
- Never lose hope, Charlie - A touching and lovely poem - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/23/2017 8:23:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise...

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