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In High Definition

In high definition... There is an old oak tree in our backyard. This old oak limbs weep like a willow. It branches out to the stars. The moon effervescent shines above. During the winter, the moss hangs low. I see the wind blow through its leaves in autumn. There is an old oak in our backyard Where a widow sits beneath weeping over love lost. The dawn has broken. The dew is high. This old oak is well defined. She has limbs that reach high in the sky. The sun photosynthesis makes each leaf shine. Her depth is sublime. This old oak is part of home. Many visitors she knows as a widower rests before he moves on. This old oak tree stands tall As a City's landmark. |__________________________________________________| Penned on November 22, 2014!

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Date: 11/27/2014 9:31:00 AM
I love your take on this challenge. Great write! An old oak as a weeping willow is very ingenious.
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Date: 11/23/2014 3:30:00 AM
So wonderfully put up Verlena! Great write n the poet needs no introduction! Gl in contest!
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 11/23/2014 12:03:00 PM
Thanks Dr. Upma for your awesome remarks. Verlena
Date: 11/22/2014 11:28:00 PM
Yes, I have limbs that weep every time I move them!! Great word play here and I have seen oak trees covered with moss that hangs down like a weeping willow!! Awesome!
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 11/23/2014 2:37:00 AM
Thanks David for your super-awesome response. Verlena
Date: 11/22/2014 8:53:00 PM
wonderful imagery Verlena - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 11/22/2014 9:18:00 PM
Thanks Jan... Verlena

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