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In Hamburg I Loved a Strange Girl

In Hamburg I loved A strange girl, She put my whole being In a whirl, She spurned everybody But me, I made her happy, In Hamburg. But if she had Spurned me, I'd have looked her in the eye, And run away, And in my room, I would have cried, I might even have died, In Hamburg. (Very faithfully based on a song written aged ca. 18).

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Date: 4/6/2015 11:22:00 AM
No wonder..simplicity has its own charm.The depth of emotion is revealed beautifully..great
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Carl Halling
Date: 4/7/2015 7:27:00 AM
Thank you so much, Syam, I'm so pleased you like it.

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