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In Dreams

In Dreams Family reunion, can't get enough Chillin' and talkin' about all kinds of stuff Homemade ice cream taste so good Want to eat it all day, if I could I would We laugh and talk about old times Relaxing and sipping on our favorite wines My brother in law says I have a gift for you It is a ring all shiny and new I tell him I will cherish it and clinch the ring real tight I know I am waking up from my dream tonight My brother in law visited me from the beyond A gift I will treasure, our family bond Contest by: Francine Roberts September 22, 2012

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/4/2012 2:05:00 PM

I'd love to see a poem about this visit from your brother in law. that sounds SO interesting!! Good luck in her contest, Debra.

Apoorva Patrikar

Date: 9/30/2012 12:55:00 AM

wonderful lines :)

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 9/23/2012 3:15:00 PM

A lovely poem, Debra. Extremely well written and very enjoyable. Bless you, Gordon

Debra Falgout
Date: 9/24/2012 9:35:00 PM

Thank you very much Gordaon, glad you enjoyed, have a great evening, peace,debra

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/22/2012 3:32:00 PM

Family is the most important thing in our lives Debra. Love it!! Have a lovely weekend. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Debra Falgout
Date: 9/24/2012 9:36:00 PM

Very much so Anne Lise, thanks, love debra