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In Doleful Shadows I Lie

In doleful shadows I lie, Never touched by the moonlight, Nor shun upon by the sun, My existence is an eternal Autumn, And the tempest of sighs hidden by the wind, And the rain of eternal tears, Washes the marble slab covering, My remains.

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Anton Smith

Date: 9/13/2015 4:16:00 PM

Would you care to look at my Facebook page that might be of interest: https://www.facebook.com/Raven3.gothic?ref=bookmarks Feel free to share it on this page as well.

Skat A

Date: 6/27/2015 1:43:00 AM

Max, Congratulations on having your poem featured this past week. SKAT love

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/28/2015 2:17:00 PM

- Hello new member: Max - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thank you for choosing to share your poem here with us. - I look forward to reading more in the future. - Have a good time and I wish you good luck. - (Give and receive comments) - / / Anne-Lise :)

Max Corvus
Date: 6/3/2015 6:52:00 PM

I cannot find words to express my gratitude. An acquaintance had informed me that there was a poetry site called ps, so I checked it out. I am enraptured to see that my poems are being read and commented. I will drop by and drop a line to some of your poems.

Skat A

Date: 5/28/2015 12:22:00 PM

hello Max, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Max Corvus
Date: 6/3/2015 6:57:00 PM

Thank you my dear. I am a mid 20s Goth from Croatia. I study English literature and Swedish. Please add me on facebook, my name is the same. I am enraptured to know that there are other artistic souls like me.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/28/2015 11:49:00 AM

That is deep Max, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@