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In Defense of the Guardian

While the guardian of night watches a looming thunderstorm , the power of his animus defends earthy home and a village’s turf with grit… and in the stillness of a child or wife’s rest, when twitching snaps of a labor’s chime rings out, this protector aches for respect and admiration to forge ahead into gateways of Olympian struggles; molded like so by creation’s decree. Though labeled as a dominant ruler , it is his gentle side that comforts all: lending a compassionate hand, affirming a woman’s essence, and thirsting to reveal human frailties without question. Knowingly ,the peg behind the guardian of nights is home's queen, fueling a determined will and affectionate spirit by validating his man’s untiring role…without question. 7/8/2015 Patriarchy Contest Sponsor: Thomas Martin

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Date: 8/2/2015 10:34:00 PM
Superb write nette that's worthy of great win! Big congrats!
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Date: 8/2/2015 12:01:00 AM
Nette, congratulations. Forever **SKAT**
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Date: 8/1/2015 3:50:00 PM
Enjoyed this one Nette, thanks.
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Date: 7/12/2015 2:05:00 PM
Nette, Excellent work in every respect!! Congratulations on POTD!! Cheers and Best Wishes
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Date: 7/12/2015 1:45:00 AM
Wow! Congratulations on have this excellent poem selected for POTD Nette!
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Date: 7/11/2015 8:43:00 AM
A poem of precision and just think created while faced with threatening Storms. I honestly don't know how you do it but Congratulations on this beauty.....
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Date: 7/9/2015 11:24:00 PM
Nette, congrats on being POTD with this wonderful piece about the wonderful nature of man. He is a wonderful creation, indeed. This is beautiful, dear.
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Date: 7/9/2015 10:49:00 PM
This is so sensitive and beautiful Nette. You've touched both on the man's strength and softer side. Congrats on POTD! hugs!
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Date: 7/9/2015 9:02:00 PM
Excellent! Gives such a feeling of honor and strength.7+!
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Date: 7/9/2015 4:47:00 PM
Wonderful, Nette! A great man is a strong protector but can still be gentle and compassionate. Congrats on TPOD...I enjoyed reading this today! Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 7/9/2015 3:07:00 PM
Congratulations, Nette! I enjoyed the read. All the very best!! :) john.
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Date: 7/9/2015 2:14:00 PM
- Dear Nette, congratulations on your beautiful poem - A pleasure to see that it is today's poem !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/9/2015 9:23:00 AM
Nette, poem of the day!! yippee!~Olive Eloisa
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Date: 7/9/2015 8:59:00 AM
Nette, congratulations on having this beautiful write selected as Poem Of The Day, enjoy the honor
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Date: 7/9/2015 8:07:00 AM
Beautiful write, Nette, congratulations on Poem of the day. Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/9/2015 6:58:00 AM
dropping back to say congrats on Poem of the Day:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/8/2015 9:34:00 PM
Validation comes when one can give without taking, share without receiving, understand without judgment, lift a sad heart with compassion and be as one spirit crossing the eternities..my first thought after reading this thought provoking poem
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Date: 7/8/2015 6:48:00 PM
WOW, Nette, I think my heart just grew two sizes...a splendid portrayal of the complexities of being men and women.
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Date: 7/8/2015 3:13:00 PM
There are lots of good, loving men around despite their need to be dominant.It's in the genes! Dashing piece of poetry!
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Date: 7/8/2015 2:49:00 PM
Well written, Nette! Enjoyed this! Tom
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Date: 7/8/2015 2:47:00 PM
It is nice to be comforted by the strength of a man while in the midst of a storm...lovely nette
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Date: 7/8/2015 2:38:00 PM
may you ever be protected Nette:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/8/2015 2:30:00 PM
lovely write
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