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In Deep Waters

It's the depths of your ocean - more important than wavelength. The continuous questioning stumbles on edge. Disbalancing proportion influences the bane's strength. There's single suggestion: Ink must be left as a pledge to the circles of Living for the happier dusting for the better tomorrow where the Sun WILL arise, currency is caregiving, where the lie is disgusting, where the most pain is sorrow over choosing unwise. I hope, somewhere in timeline our veins will be woven into something tremendous like a hydrogen bomb. I know, this growth is malign. But I wish I could point on your heart for momentous question 'where I come from?" 27/05/2013 NikA

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Date: 6/1/2013 7:36:00 AM
Stunning lines, all in a simple request of "get to know my strengths & flaws...all of me". Love this!
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Date: 6/3/2013 2:59:00 PM
Oh, Thank you, Drake! You've catched that. And, unfortunately, sometimes even that kind of metaphorical calling can't reach the aim.

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