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Path of trod packed gray snow berries on trees around its edges grow. Fine drawn tails of branches bared bud less against a sky that covers sun and high clouds; over this place lost in time. Shrill yet sweet bird song adding to my sense that certain things are best not experienced alone. Mind elsewhere I slip my boot twisting down and under an exposed root leaving me half sitting and cursing. Having done its work in delivering thoughts of you it frees my foot. As I cross Lovers bridge over the rushes with my newly acquired hobble I find myself playing with a thought .. is it better to believe I am strong than to try to love?

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Date: 1/3/2016 7:15:00 PM
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Date: 9/18/2013 10:41:00 AM
Profound write this Anthony! I love how you draw the reader into your path and point out the wonders of nature that would be a pleasure to be experienced by someone. The conflict between being alone and unhurt and seeking out love with a chance of getting hurt is always one that almost every human has to make. Very well penned!
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