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In Blue Jeans

Glancing at the darkest night A sparkling jewel I see She shineth down on me She is the prettiest I have seen So very sparkly is she As she twinkles up above She truly is the one I love Though not in blue jeans not at all For she is dressed up for a ball So sparkly is she Inspiring my poetry A million diamonds cascade down Venus in blue jeans Not for me Dressed to impress in her very best gown On the darkest night So sparkly and bright She truly lights up the town A million no a trillion diamonds I do see Sparkling down on me Venus in blue jeans No siree Dressed to impress in her best ball gown this jean less Venus is shining down Written 8th August at 02.00 am Contest A BRIAN STRAND PREMIERE CHOICE Sponsor Brian Strand 2nd PLACE

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 8/26/2022 6:59:00 PM

Congratulations , Ann Beautiful from start to finish. Very, very creative, Pangie

Ann Gilmour
Date: 8/27/2022 8:16:00 AM

Dearest Panagiota your lovely words mean so much to me dear friend and I thank you. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/13/2022 9:43:00 PM

Congratulations on your fantastic Second place win Ann. A lovely night show from the sky. Blessings xxoo

Ann Gilmour
Date: 8/27/2022 8:15:00 AM

Oh bless you dear Connie, thank you so much for your encouraging words my friend. It was truly stunning to see that night sky. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Constance La France

Date: 8/12/2022 4:12:00 PM

Ann, beautiful poem and congratulations on your win in Brian's contest, blessings ~Constance

Ann Gilmour
Date: 8/27/2022 8:14:00 AM

Thank you so much Constance for your congratulations ~ I was truly thrilled to reach that position in Brian's contest. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Jcb Brul

Date: 8/12/2022 4:02:00 PM

Congratulations Ann. I love blue jeans, and so this splendid poem. All the best. ^__^ JCB

Ann Gilmour
Date: 8/27/2022 8:12:00 AM

So many thanks to you JCB for your kind words and congrats to you for the top spot, well done... with kindest thoughts Ann xx