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In Bloom

Written July 29, 2013

The wind blows the rainbows down
Turns your frown upside down
Then spins it back around

The sun hides the moon
Underneath its coat in bloom
The flowers came late this June

The rain in a teardrop
Falls like dew from a leaf
When she looks at me

See that look upon her face
Used to take her to the stars
Now she's headed back from Mars

Now that Venus loves her more
Wouldn't throw her to the floor
Like before

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  1. Date: 4/21/2015 1:13:00 AM
    nicely done ;)

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 4:00:00 PM
    I enjoyed your poem Brandon....nicely done