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In Between

With newness of spirit have I returned
To a point enshrouded in shadowy uncertainty
A cross line within the seemingly good and bad
Everything inconclusive disappears from sight
I know that you are there
In between. . . 
Unseen within this deplorable life of mine
Within boundaries am I disclosed from your sight
In some ways this is better in my eyes
It seems I have come to realize
That I cannot go in between
I either take the distance or not
Either way, I will not find you
In time to say I love you
I wish I could merely make you out
I wish for only a moment to glimpse
In between
—just to know you are there  

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  1. Date: 11/17/2012 7:45:00 AM
    so pensive..and so many verses have been written of the In Between, one of the first sci-fi fantasy authors I love wrote all the time about the In Between H.P. Lovecraft..Try short Story The Lurker at the Theshold..Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 4:50:00 AM
    I really enjoyed this write of yours this afternoon Laura, I hope your Monday is a good one :)

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 11:04:00 AM
    I am not a pro on any form of poetry but...I know when I read a poem if I have enjoyed it. Now I have read yours and I have indeed enjoyed it as always Laura. I wish you a wonderful weekend and hope you find much inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors. Love, Carol