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In Another Time

In another time really Would my shoes have been pink today Or would my hair have been so flat Would the earth still spin on its axis As we pollute the environment In another time would I have really Thought about my shoes first before I Picked up the plastic bottle on the side walk In another time can we all love one another Making sure our people have food and shelter Can we stop camping outside all night for the latest electronics And love nature, and give a meal to someone in need In another time, No not another time Let that time be now

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Date: 8/16/2016 3:03:00 AM
Very deep and thought-provoking..... Congrats Michelle, for your placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 8/13/2016 2:05:00 PM
Congrats!!! Michelle...on your win my friend...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 8/13/2016 12:49:00 AM
Congrats Michelle!! You are a top ten winner! Something about this poem made me think of pink hair... not pink shoes... that alone provoked me into your placement! (Blah blah blah: You rock!)
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Date: 7/21/2016 5:12:00 PM
Thank you
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Date: 7/21/2016 1:49:00 PM
Nice poem Michelle :)
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Michelle James
Date: 7/22/2016 8:37:00 AM
Thanks
Date: 7/21/2016 7:09:00 AM
Especially camping out for the Retro Jordans....awesome write!!!
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Michelle James
Date: 7/22/2016 8:36:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 7/20/2016 6:41:00 PM
Let it be now, no clearer words to be said.
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Michelle James
Date: 7/22/2016 8:37:00 AM
Thank you

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