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In Another Life

By the fire, crackling with warmth We kept each other cool Hands locking in the soft breeze Eyes woven in a timeless pattern Gentle for each other, dark lace In another place. Intelligent, your eyes spoke for your soul You were nobody’s fool Pretty words of love for infinity Your thoughts raced ahead in time Strong with a heart that knew no fear In another year. Beautiful moments, enclosed in the smoky air Where music and silence rule Fretful fingers wove flowers in my hair As tender as the touch of the wind Blazing love bled me like a knife In another life. Copyright (c) Silverla StMichael 2007 (The inspiration for this poem was an actual past life memory.)

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Date: 7/29/2014 12:25:00 PM
in another world you shall find bliss, nice and sweet yet despair creep slowly.
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Date: 7/26/2014 1:12:00 AM
Best...I just dream and remained still by reading your this piece Really Awesome..!!!
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Date: 7/17/2014 3:19:00 PM
Fretful fingers wove flowers in my hair. Almost D.H. Lawrence in description. Lovely write. God Bless. D.
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Date: 6/30/2014 12:55:00 AM
Absolutely gripping and absorbing tale, Silverla, Congrats on the win,
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Date: 6/29/2014 9:00:00 PM
Incredible images of such softness and beauty created in this past life rendering, Silverla. Many congrats on your win. bfn Elaine
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Date: 6/29/2014 6:42:00 PM
Congrats on a great win, Silverla. A very heartfelt write. Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 6/29/2014 4:48:00 PM
Hi Silverla, congratulations on a well-deserved win! This is such a beautiful clever write that I enjoyed reading it immensely. Pandita.
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Date: 6/27/2014 11:01:00 AM
This is a beautiful poem, I thoroughly enjoyed the read... love Jayne...p.s. thank you for your very kind comment on my poem it was much appreciated xx
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Silverla Stmichael
Date: 6/28/2014 1:22:00 PM
Thank you Jayne, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Xxx.
Date: 6/25/2014 10:48:00 PM
Briiliant! Memories to cherish, memories to help us forget, yet memories are ours to keep. Thankyou.
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Silverla Stmichael
Date: 6/28/2014 1:22:00 PM
Indeed...thank you Mark.
Date: 6/25/2014 10:54:00 AM
Thank you for sharing :)
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Silverla Stmichael
Date: 6/28/2014 1:22:00 PM
:)
Date: 6/24/2014 7:44:00 PM
This is very nice. I love anything with Soul in it. Very emotional. Regards, Colin.
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Silverla Stmichael
Date: 6/28/2014 1:23:00 PM
I do tend to favour spiritual themes. Thank you Colin. Xxx.
Date: 6/24/2014 4:08:00 PM
"fretful fingers wove flowers in my hair.. :) what an enchanting picture that is.. :) nice one. ;D
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Silverla Stmichael
Date: 6/28/2014 1:23:00 PM
Yes it is, I agree. Probably painted a tad romantically, but the actual past life memory it comes from is truly beautiful. Thank you. Xxx.

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