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In An Enchanted Forest

Hair tousled looks a mess was worth it that soft caress. Maybe just a dream ... felt surreal, my body bending as a willow tree, branches were my arms wrapped around me. We walked with light steps in our dream state. You were a tree of apples how I savoured you. I enjoyed biting into skin ripened by suns warmth I was enchanted by the overwhelming peace coming from this vast forest a forest of dreams, a release from life's toils, always there in my slumber. Penned 15 November 2017

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Date: 11/19/2017 6:22:00 AM
This is a soft and enchanting write my friend! I felt a calm peace that came over me when I read this delightful poem this morning! I surely enjoyed this amazing poem, all directed towards my extravagant belief of wonderment! I really loved your feelings and emotions that sprawl throughout your enlightening piece, what a fantastic poem, Great Work!!
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Date: 11/18/2017 10:10:00 PM
Delightfully enchanting poem. Wonderful, Seren.
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Date: 11/18/2017 7:42:00 PM
Excellent Seren...I'd like to be there
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Date: 11/18/2017 7:41:00 PM
Beautiful dream like poem Seren! :)
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