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In a Puddle

Circular round, quite over and over Raindrops fall rightly into the puddle Grey as the darkest color except night Making the mind to become quite muddled The purest of reflections disturbed here Through the puddle it is shown now aligned Grandest creation put at a small scale It remains still when perfectly designed Great puddle reflects the world above it Only interrupted by a few drops They are a blessing to view, heaven sent Made for enjoyment, boys in them to hop Silver surface suggests sure royalty Abundance of delight, marvelous light Reflected off the surface of water Brilliant and beautiful even in night No matter how grey the sky is above Puddles collect raindrops quite lovingly Making ripples to flow from end to end Rain creates an aura and is friendly Opens the heart to the beat of a drum Leaving the feeling of awe before me No part of nature put forth projection Life that is important and surely free Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/31/2014 6:34:00 PM
One can never view a puddle quite the same after reading your poetic words !! Beautifully descriptive verses !! Enjoyed !!!
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Date: 1/30/2014 11:25:00 PM
Hi Russell! What a great write, so full of imagery and metaphor! A very creative write! I enjoyed it very much! :)
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Date: 1/30/2014 8:31:00 PM
Life, is more than a puddle. A wonderful read Russell.... SKAT
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Date: 1/30/2014 5:21:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your creative work..It is interesting watching a raindrop hit a puddle or water and the circle that gets ever larger that comes fromt that that is the centrifical force..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 1/30/2014 4:14:00 PM
A very nice poem on rain and puddles! it is raining a LOT here today in Utah. I'm just glad it is not snow like back east!!!
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Date: 1/30/2014 6:18:00 AM
- As always a beautiful poem from you, Russell. - Hope your day will be fine :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/30/2014 5:27:00 AM
the life of a puddle aptly portrayed in stunning beauty Russell you have excelled Shadow x smile hug
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Date: 1/30/2014 12:07:00 AM
You have described a common and often ignored puddle of water so poetically well here. Good job, Russell.
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