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In a Place Far Away

His wounds are deep, hidden, where no one sees, almost invisible, as his eyes plead. Alone without a home, he lives on the street, another victim, the cold air meets. Stacking boxes, to block the wind, layer after layer, and another night begins. Back alley fugitive, as he rambles for food, once a hero, in these boots stood. Time now his enemy, although once his friend, as the visions come calling, once again. Somehow overlooked, simply cast away, but the number he recites, to this very day. Minds can escape, but only for awhile, as he fondly recalls, those days gone by. Daylight comes, as it did yesterday, but he is stuck in a war, and a place far away.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/7/2008 8:42:00 AM
This is a beautiful write. This is our country's (one of them) great shame. BG
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Date: 12/7/2008 5:40:00 AM
Such a sad story told from your beautiful, caring heart. Awesome write that hurts with it's truth. Love, Shar
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Date: 12/7/2008 5:37:00 AM
Christy this poem tells of such a sad state that many hero's come home to face - In exactly 12 days I get to drive down to Sacramento airport and pick up my son and his wife who will be home for a month - Chrisy you and your family remain in prayer's always - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 12/7/2008 3:48:00 AM
An all too sad and true tale of a life, forgotten and all too vivid. beautifully written and very compassionate, love, Kristin
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Date: 12/7/2008 12:19:00 AM
So very compassionate~A reflection, of a truly beautiful heart, "Yours!"~Telling an old familiar sad story, of the tearful injustace, toward a life, used and discarded, among the so called American dreams? Good for some-sorrows for others! "Your heart is very "Beautiful Christy Hardy!"~And, this has 'never' escaped my, nor Heavens eyes! Keep doing what your doing dear~"Shining Brightly With Love, For All To See!"~"My Love To You Always, And Beyond, John!"~Bye Precious Lady!:)
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