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In a Hotel Room

A half-full bottle of scotch stands in the middle of a stool, as the wind blows away the cigar ashes away from the ashtray Besides the stool, a king-size bed carries the weight of a man holding a cigar on his mouth, planning who the next victim will be; a person who is stopping at nothing to destroy his drug empire

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/28/2016 8:31:00 PM
Teddy,, congratulations on your 101 in a row contest win. Luv **SKAT**
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/29/2016 5:34:00 AM
Hi Skat. Thank you so much for your kind applause!! *^_^* <3
Date: 7/28/2016 12:08:00 AM
Congrats on your win with this awesome write. :) Sunita
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/28/2016 2:15:00 AM
Thank you so much Sunita, for your kind applause!! *^_^*
Date: 7/27/2016 9:54:00 PM
Teddy, Congratulations on your win. Stop by my latest blog "THE REAL ME." Enjoy your win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 7/28/2016 2:14:00 AM
Thank you so much, Linda!! *^_^* <3 <3 I'll sure do!!! *_^
Date: 7/7/2015 2:42:00 PM
nice win
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 4/4/2016 2:28:00 AM
Thanks Linda. Sorry for my late reply. It seems my mails are traveling in light years, lol.
Date: 7/6/2015 9:39:00 PM
Teddy :) Congratulations, thank you for supporting my contest. Love **SKAT**
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/7/2015 11:21:00 AM
You are always welcome Skat! ;-) Thank you for your applause! *^_^*
Date: 11/17/2013 11:49:00 PM
Congratulations on the fine win,Teddy
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 11/19/2013 1:52:00 AM
Thank you for your applaud, Dr. Ram Mehta! ;-)
Date: 11/17/2013 4:05:00 PM
Teddy, . Congratulation, Thank you for the fine win..... Sending hugs: -) Thank you for the support. always~ LINDA
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 11/19/2013 1:47:00 AM
Thanks Linda. You are a great support too! ;-)
Date: 2/20/2013 1:56:00 AM
Many Congratulations on your win Teddy, sorry i am a bit late xx
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/20/2013 6:31:00 AM
Thank you for your applaud, Mandy! I really appreciate it!
Date: 2/20/2013 1:34:00 AM
Good job! - Your hotel is 7 star! - Congratulations! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/20/2013 6:33:00 AM
Ha ha ha. Thanks Anne-Lise. I was inspired by the godfather series! :)
Date: 2/19/2013 8:36:00 PM
A small poem with a big story to tell. VEry clever. Congrats on your win.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/20/2013 6:33:00 AM
Thanks Andrea. You are so kind!
Date: 2/19/2013 5:05:00 PM
Quite the story in this room. congratulations on your win. Love, jocye
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/20/2013 6:35:00 AM
Thanks Joyce! I love storytelling with poems too! :)
Date: 2/19/2013 4:14:00 PM
Teddy, CONGRATULATIONS :-) ~ love your awesome winning poem in Susan's contest.. take care.. PD
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/20/2013 6:37:00 AM
Thanks for your warm and kind applaud Poet Destroyer A! Really thankful! :)
Date: 2/11/2013 9:25:00 AM
An intriguiging vignette! ... Terry (very nice)
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/12/2013 3:48:00 AM
Thanks for your applaud, Terry! Really appreciate it!

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