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In a Box

In A Box BY MALIK BAKER Puberty, relationships, identity versus roll confusion As clear as a newly married couple with a hangover Too many faces—even just one Sweaty, shaky, within me a rapid stampede In the midst of a haze raid Like trash, garbage thrown out of sight. Residing at the center of the cranium Hypothetical criticism holding me captive. Anxiety leading to payback by abdominal torture. Dejection, second-rated, obscured BRAINSTORM, cause I either say nothing or I’m just not with it. More like imaginary . . . I have no real friends. Either stood up or no invitation Are they playing the Joker and Two-Face? Dreamscape, the nostalgia of my childhood days . . . Might as well throw me in solitary confinement. Four walls and the view of life from inside Dissecting the past and the future Like The Thinker, contemplating . . . he goes nowhere. This . . . is the good life. First time happenings visually repeat. Sensational like the nineties Plagued by the mind of Mr. Perfect Who am I? Certainly not the almighty Seven years of build-up to this day. There is no such thing as magic overnight, But the road to recovery is here. Trials and tribulations dismantled. The burden has been lifted. Don’t look back, promising change is coming . . .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/26/2016 7:42:00 AM
- Welcome to Poetry Soup, Malik :) - A great narrative poem, well written :) - hugs // Sun :)
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Date: 4/25/2016 8:14:00 PM
Hi Malik, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 4/24/2016 12:33:00 AM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Malik. :)
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Date: 4/24/2016 12:31:00 AM
Malik, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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