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In a Box

This box is too short; I’m in a cramp, needless to say, it is very damp. Earthworms are crawling; moving in, at least it is not a next of kin. I cannot see without my lamp, besides, the air is mighty thin. In this cold drab box I lie, left without saying goodbye. I wasn’t in a hurry or rush, to fill this still breathless hush. Nor did I have the time to cry, before hidden by earthy lush... Copyright © 2008 By Carly S. Muzzey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/11/2013 1:55:00 AM
this is my worst nightmare, being buried alive!! Good and creepy!!
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Date: 10/9/2012 12:45:00 PM
There are other ways of being in a box. I'm sure you have had those in the back of your mind. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver
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Date: 10/9/2012 8:37:00 AM
Congratulations so happy to read your well deserved featured poem this week Caryl. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/7/2012 9:33:00 PM
Wow....interesting poem shedding a whole new light on the box none of us ever want to be in - I really like your poem Caryl. Congrats on it being featured this week - Shaz
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Date: 12/27/2009 9:32:00 AM
A write that awaits many of us Caryl, nicely written >> James
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Date: 10/16/2009 11:47:00 AM
Nicely done on a topic most don't want to talk about. Keep writing. Sara
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