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The wilderness has been improved of late, Or so they say. The maple trees where sticky syrup oozed Between the cracks of scarred and broken bark, The wild apple trees whose crooked branches Cradled clumps of crudely woven twigs, Have been replaced by houses, row on row Of painted boxes gleaming in the naked sun. The narrow trail, a divine doodle Traced across the earth and kept in place By centuries of coyote and bear And deer that bounded zigzag up the slope Lies tame and straight beneath the asphalt sweep That cuts a leveled swath across the peak. The blackberry briars that pressed against the path And tore the skin from little hands that wiped the purple stain on Sunday clothes, Are cut away, and soft green grass grows in their place. “Superior development, and more to come,” The realtor explains, Not knowing that I was here before. I scan the hills for one certain house, An Improvement on a three-room shack where squirrels chattered in the rafters And wasps built nests against the eaves, And berry bushes dirtied up the window panes. The modern house is pink with snowy trim; A cement sidewalk leads from drive to door, And tulips nod obediently by the steps. Beyond the manicured lawn, The last undeveloped forest hugs the hill, And stubborn briars spill onto the planted grass. “I’ll buy the house,” I tell the man. He sees me looking at the woods and smiles Apologetically. “For a slightly higher fee,” he says, “that bit of forest can be cleared.” “I’ll take it as it is,” I tell him. “The blackberries might still grown in there.”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/11/2014 10:19:00 AM
Karen, CONGRATULATIONS, on having your poem featured on the soup's home page. I'm always enjoying The Soups top picks of the week. Take Care ~SKAT~
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Date: 1/1/2014 4:03:00 PM
Hope you are enjoying the first day of the year... Karen, , I like your first poetic piece on the site, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Karen Ruff
Date: 1/2/2014 8:20:00 AM
Thanks.
Date: 12/31/2013 8:30:00 PM
Karen get job on your first poem on Soup Welcome and have a great New Year.
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Karen Ruff
Date: 1/2/2014 8:21:00 AM
Thanks. Happy New Year to you as well
Date: 12/31/2013 2:12:00 PM
Karen, Happy 2014, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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