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Impromptu Valentine

I had no plan to fall in love with you, still you won me without pretense or art when you walked into my life impromptu. Just the real you with no retinue of fakers saying lines and acting parts; I had no plan to fall in love with you. There you came with no gain to pursue, no pretensions. You exposed your heart when you walked into my life impromptu. You swept away the ugly residue others left behind. Oh, this broken heart! I had no plan to fall in love with you. Strange as it may seem to those who view, this crazy love we share had its start when you walked into my life impromptu. Tomorrows will keep coming as they do and you and I will always be sweethearts; I had no plan to fall in love with you when you walked into my life impromptu. Copyright, January 20, 2016

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Date: 3/25/2022 9:37:00 PM
A very beautiful Villanelle. "I had no plan to fall in love with you when you walked into my life impromptu" - Great! Congratulations!
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Date: 2/25/2016 10:04:00 AM
Valentine Villanelles almost sweet as apple jelly now read on winners’ page..You are quite the sage..Sweet Congrats..Sara
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Date: 2/23/2016 10:14:00 PM
Faye, what a lovely poem you have shared... falling in love with your words impromptu... Hugs, Bobby
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Date: 2/23/2016 9:53:00 PM
Wow a lovely poem Faye.. no wonder a great win.. big congrats!
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Date: 2/23/2016 4:08:00 PM
Faye, Congratulations on your "Valentine's Villanelle Challenge" have a nice day. ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/27/2016 2:38:00 AM
Faye, I am falling in love with your words but I know this feeling so well now.. =`) I am okei thank you.. =`) so happy for remembering me and praying for me that touched me really.. it's nice to know that somebody you haven't met does such to you.. =`) God bless you and your family!!! We are still on the process of going through many things but I know in God's right time, it will all be alright... =`) hugs!~Olive Eloisa =`)
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