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Impression Carnval

IMPRESSION CARNIVAL My sensual implosion A rainbow mexicality With blue New Orleans and Hats Masks People Noise All bursting on a sucked-up image and There is tin can music blatting cacophonous Between, strokes but There is fun Insanity! Movement of go-to-hell frolic This sits on leaden plain I sigh Dave Austin

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Joe Maverick

Date: 2/28/2017 4:11:00 PM

I can sense the owerwhelmingness within that 'I believe' you are engaging me with here Daver, I think the last lines give it so much extra dimension also, very well done.'

Daniel Turner

Date: 2/28/2017 7:39:00 AM

Laissez les bons temps rouler. Fun read, Daver:)

Daver Austin
Date: 2/28/2017 9:06:00 AM

In old age I just mostly sit around, so the reason for inner workings. thanks for the visit. daver

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/27/2017 5:12:00 PM

HOW COOL this is. Kind of like jazz put to poetry words. Sorry your computer has been acting up. Next time I am at PFT, I'll let folks know!

Daver Austin
Date: 2/28/2017 9:10:00 AM

How good to hear from you. Word jazz is a great name for this sort of stuff. When you sit around most of the time, you wonder about things like Mardi Gras abd old times. Love, daver

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/27/2017 4:36:00 PM

Mardi Gras fun and wild abandonment are celebrated in the creative expression you have shared in your wonderful mélange of colorful passion Daver. I love it! I hope they televise some of the fun tomorrow. ; ) 7

Daver Austin
Date: 2/28/2017 9:14:00 AM

Good to be back. Not sure how my computer will work. Poetry Soup wants to change browsers and I screwed up trying to change, so if my old window doesn't work later on, I'm in trouble again. Love, daver

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 2/27/2017 4:38:00 PM

Mardi Gras....my kindle always changes my words and I often miss it. It is so frustrating! ; (