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Imposing Beauty Unseen By Mortals

Fragrance in garden. Memories of fresh plowed earth. Ghost of ancient planters plant. Seeds that bloom in spring. Burst forth in magnificence. No eyes to behold grandeur. Gone from this garden. Where once fellowship had been. Made to leave because of sin.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/7/2009 10:13:00 AM
Powerful writing, Marty. Thank you for sharing and thank you for your kind comments on mine. Love, Lainie
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Date: 12/5/2009 4:19:00 PM
great message in this poem, I love it!!
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Date: 12/5/2009 8:59:00 AM
Powerful and most beautiful words, Marty, luv your title too..something to think about.. on this snowy day in N.J.... blessings... luv... Linda-Marie "Sweetie"
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Date: 12/4/2009 11:30:00 AM
So beautiful for my eyes is this garden,so sweet is the scent--Charma
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Date: 12/4/2009 2:50:00 AM
I Love This One Marty ... Beautiful Scene In A Story, Which Made The Ending, Even More Potent ... Going Into My Fav's ... What A Great Read To Start My Early Day ... MoonBee
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Date: 12/2/2009 2:41:00 PM
Interesting write here kinda an unexpected finish. Nicely done. Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 12/2/2009 7:45:00 AM
Nice word-play friend... Keep em comin'......:JP]
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