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Impermanence

"Death is not extinguishing the light; it is only putting out the lamp because the dawn has come." By Rabindranath Tagore death sublime eternal life's journey ends i n e v i t a b l e river meets the ocean the wheel of life keeps moving ignoring sad separations blazing auburn fall leaves sprawl on ground reminding life's tragic impermanence Life is a dream, death a permanent pause end of hopes, and wishes, blissful joys bright light dimmed, memories remain tender reminiscences of being together caring for loved ones dreams never die death fails to erase dream February 16, 2022 For E-Form Etheree Contest Theme: Death Syllables checked by HMS.com Sponsor: Constance La France SECOND PLACE Brian Strand Formal Poetry Contest FIRST PLACE

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Date: 3/13/2022 5:22:00 AM
Truths of life very beautifully said in etheree form. Each line has a truth. Congratulations!
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Date: 2/25/2022 10:39:00 AM
The dawn has certainly come in your wonderful Ethereee Mala! This is filled with amazing images and lines that engage me - life may end but the dreams never die. What a wonderful perception dear friend. Many congratulations on your win! Blessings of eternal dreams to you!
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Date: 2/21/2022 5:47:00 AM
Hi Mala, I chose the same topic. I enjoyed how you wrote yours. Congrats on a well-deserved win-Alexis
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Date: 2/20/2022 1:10:00 PM
Mala, congratulations on your Second Place win in my E Forms - Etheree contest with your wonderful poem, I loved it and the quote ~Constance
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 2/20/2022 7:16:00 PM
Thank you, Constance. I am honoured.
Date: 2/16/2022 9:22:00 PM
So much truth in this etheree. Well-writ. Best wishes in the contest. This gem goes to my FAVES.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 2/20/2022 7:17:00 PM
Thank you so much, JCB. To your fave! That's such an honour!

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