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Immortality of Bark

As I am here surrounded by the Numbness of tree trunks - still and nameless in the breeze - A Willow weeping crystals of uncertain Bombarding a century that does not belong to me But I AM here surrounded by the people who blindly thrust my chest and leave the broken thorns and no one cares when mutilating names of lovers How hurtful is when carving in immortality of bark... copyright@iolandascripca2012

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Date: 10/29/2012 11:59:00 AM
Interesting work..The carving can last a very long time but sometimes the tree dies or is cut for one reason or another.Great idea for a poem and good presentation...Sara
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Date: 10/23/2012 12:24:00 PM
Wonderful reading your amazing poetry today Iolanda. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/23/2012 1:27:00 AM
This is so emotional and lovely. True how people can destroy nature.
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