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Immortal Flower

She is like a immortal flower Always in full bloom Her presence makes me warm inside Oh i wish i can hold her soon Her voice makes my legs go weak Her touch is amazing too As she is my immortal flower Who makes all my dreams come true I've held her many atimes Knowing how delicate she is Her skin is like a petal So beautiful soft and sweet Her eyes are as blue as the ocean Her hair is as soft as can be I love it when i kiss her it makes my soul dance with glee She is my gourgous Angel When im with her i know i belong My life then has purpose And i know its deffinatly not wrong

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/20/2010 5:39:00 PM
A beautiful tribute, Johnathan. Congratulations on your win. ...Jimmy
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Date: 2/18/2010 9:34:00 AM
"Congratulations" on your win,Jonathan. Sincere, Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/16/2010 2:10:00 AM
A lovely thought for a lovely lady. A lovely poem you have here Jonathan. Congratulations to your win on the contest. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 2/12/2010 6:29:00 PM
Jonathan, Your romantic tribute to this lovely lady is deserving of your win. Congratulations. Aloha, Connie
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Date: 2/4/2010 8:02:00 PM
Dear Jonathan, Congratulations on YOUR well deserved Win in MacMcGovern's Contest "Anything Goes" YOU are a True Romantic to LOVE so deeply Superb Write ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 2/4/2010 1:06:00 AM
Whoever this immortal flower is, she's very lucky indeed to have such a lovely poem inspired and dedicated to her! Congrats on your win :) --a typo on "gorgeous" &"definitely"btw, hope this helps...
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Date: 2/3/2010 3:05:00 AM
Congratulations Johnathan, on your placement in Mac McGovern’s “Anything Goes” Mini-Poetry contest with these loving words. You are in the winners’ circle! Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 2/2/2010 1:04:00 PM
Congrats for your placing with this sweet little love poem, johnathon! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 2/2/2010 7:38:00 AM
Very emotional love song. Congratulations Joyce
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Date: 2/2/2010 4:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest . May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/1/2010 7:55:00 PM
Sounds like love. Congratulations on being one of the winners in the Anything Goes contest. Keep on writing. Karen
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Date: 2/1/2010 4:45:00 PM
Congrats Jonathan on your winning poem in Mac's contest.. well deserved win for an excellent write.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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