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Immortal Beloved

My immortal beloved dusk and thick as night your dark skin and rolling curls I have sought for centuries... The flood from your candid form flows like a river my eternal beloved I feel your past pain of mortality.. I sense the warmth and current of your deep red blood I hurl and skew my kisses like crimson roses of fire... Your hands touch me light and cold sending a shiver through me we shine with the glory of Luna... Gift me with your lunar smile your irises, sullen and chaotic they flash when they hear my sigh soaring from deep within my gut... yes, you my shadow woman bend your head of black hair just slightly to one side drink my blood, heart of hearts... I will give you everything and while i'm in agony you, my love of all loves draw sustenance from my burning blood...

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Gerald Kithinji

Date: 11/21/2013 3:06:00 PM

Glory of Luna--- gloire de Lune? Perhaps. Intoxicating!

Ken Carroll
Date: 11/21/2013 4:54:00 PM

thank you Gerald! Ken

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 10/19/2013 2:45:00 AM

WOW! You are one romantic man. Don't change. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla

Ken Carroll
Date: 10/19/2013 4:29:00 AM

Hi Lucilla, Thank you for your kindest comment.. Ken

Kelly Deschler

Date: 10/18/2013 9:14:00 PM

This is a very romantic gothic poem, Ken! Very captivating and enchanting! I loved it!...Thank you so much for the kind comments.

Ken Carroll
Date: 10/18/2013 10:21:00 PM

Thank you Kelly, you are most kind.. Ken

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 10/18/2013 3:43:00 PM

penned really beautiful dear friend

Ken Carroll
Date: 10/18/2013 3:58:00 PM

Hey Liam, Thanks buddy for the visit.. Ken

Len Gasun

Date: 10/18/2013 2:39:00 AM

A very beautiful Halloween poem, I've enjoyed reading this afternoon my dear friend Ken. Kudos! Thank you so much also for sharing. So love it and enjoyed! love lots and big hugs, Leonora

Ken Carroll
Date: 10/18/2013 4:15:00 AM

Hi Leonora, Thank you for stopping by, always appreciated.. Ken

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/17/2013 7:47:00 AM

Great Halloween work that grabs the audience and draws them into a surprise ending..If for a contest, should be in the winners' list in my book..Thanks for the review of my work..I hope that this will be a great day for you..Sara

Ken Carroll
Date: 10/17/2013 8:51:00 AM

Hey Sara, Thanks for reviewing my verse.. Ken

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/17/2013 4:30:00 AM

- Ken, you are really romantic ..... - So tender and loving words .... I must admit that I'm melting!! - Beautiful!! - Just continue .... - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ken Carroll
Date: 10/17/2013 5:48:00 AM

Hi Anne, Than you for such a lovely visit.. Ken