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Immortal

Fluttering of green dancing in spring vanish to return like sunset leaves of Autumn Water star lamps on bird's house sill flicker to die and return with the rain Dawn and sunset color changing lights brushed by sun in sky different every time A smile lives on after lips are gone sparkling not the same till replaced by the immortal First Place Winner-Brian Strand-Up To You Again-3/8/23 Third Place Winner- Constance La France-I words poetry contest 2/27/23 Tenth Place Winner-Brian Strand-Your Choice 2023 Contest-12/29/23

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Constance La France

Date: 4/3/2023 4:38:00 PM

Frances, wonderful writing and thank you for sharing your poem in my Writing Challenge congratulations !

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/8/2023 12:06:00 PM

Congratulations on this winning work for the contest. It is a good work and I enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing. Sara

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/8/2023 11:22:00 AM

Congratulations on your top winning placement Frances. Wish you always the best.

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 3/3/2023 5:52:00 PM

Lovely poem Frances, “a smile lives on after the lips are gone” love those words. Congratulations on your success in Constance’s contest… Belle

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/28/2023 7:57:00 AM

I think that gold given by the King will be most precious. Thanks for sharing this one and dropping by my page with congratulations. Sara

Frances Schiavina
Date: 2/28/2023 12:13:00 PM

Yes, Sara let us pray the Our Father with all our hearts for His Kingdom to come. A time of jubilation and rebirth of all creation.