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Imminent Sentiments

As fishes wriggling The entirety of their slippery bodies In vast oceans, lost in the glory of waters Instincts meander Their way through to the mind In a pool of imagined Sensuality With wanton desires A longing for the temporal Poignantly stands erect In the throne-room of man's emotions Motioning with a seemingly motionless demeanor Unfulfilled cravings Cradles persistence In his goal oriented pursuits Thoughts are repressed Mental imageries suppressed To pave way for domination Of pleasantly positive feelings Yet the uncouth lingers Occasionally engages the enthroned In scrimmages in their bid to dethrone them Man holds the prerogative To serve either of them willingly Equally, man possess all it takes to be Heinously hedonistic And heartily attractive in personality To please society None can reach complete perfection At both extremities © Seth Boss Kay @ 19/10/2013

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Date: 2/16/2016 2:39:00 PM
nice to see this one again
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Date: 12/1/2015 1:30:00 PM
:) HI SKAT
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Date: 5/27/2015 4:20:00 AM
I don't understand the ABC in this
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Date: 1/3/2015 7:45:00 PM
Lessons to learn here! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Seth Bosskay
Date: 2/5/2015 9:11:00 AM
thank you
Date: 1/3/2015 5:49:00 AM
Congrats on the fine win and nice take on the theme, Seth
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Seth Bosskay
Date: 2/5/2015 9:13:00 AM
thank you
Date: 1/2/2015 11:50:00 PM
Seth, Interesting topic, poem and win. CONGRATULATIONS!!! Goodnight ~LINDA~
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Seth Bosskay
Date: 2/5/2015 9:25:00 AM
thanks
Date: 1/2/2015 10:38:00 AM
Congrats Seth, I love your beautiful Poem...huggs
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Seth Bosskay
Date: 2/5/2015 9:27:00 AM
huggs in return
Date: 1/2/2015 10:15:00 AM
a powerful write many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
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Seth Bosskay
Date: 2/5/2015 9:33:00 AM
many thanks
Date: 1/2/2015 9:43:00 AM
Seth, powerful write... Congrats on your high marks in the contest... Verlena
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Seth Bosskay
Date: 2/5/2015 9:31:00 AM
Am grateful
Date: 12/25/2014 10:37:00 PM
Hello Seth,, Stopping by to say hi, and wish you the best... Enjoy your days and the coming New Year. Love ~LINDA~
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Seth Bosskay
Date: 2/5/2015 9:29:00 AM
Well appreciated
Date: 5/15/2014 8:37:00 AM
SETH, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Seth Bosskay
Date: 12/13/2014 4:23:00 AM
Its wonderful meeting you
Date: 5/12/2014 1:24:00 PM
Very good reading, Seth; welcome to Poetry Soup. I hope you find lots of encouragement and support here.
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Seth Bosskay
Date: 5/13/2014 7:55:00 AM
Thank you so much Sir.
Date: 5/12/2014 12:12:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Seth :) - I choose your first very good written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Seth Bosskay
Date: 12/13/2014 4:24:00 AM
Thank you too for making time to give me a feedback
Date: 5/12/2014 11:38:00 AM
Seth, interesting! A brilliant write, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Seth Bosskay
Date: 5/13/2014 7:40:00 AM
I am very grateful for the appreciation and warm reception. I think we will get on quite well together as friends.
Date: 5/12/2014 10:53:00 AM
Thank you for sharing :) It touched my heart
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Seth Bosskay
Date: 5/13/2014 7:45:00 AM
You're welcome and thank you too for reading.

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