Imminent Grief

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DOOM GLOOM BAD VIBES

IMMINENT GRIEF Something is wrong? What, not sure yet ... Tears roll.... Emotions flare, As they keep changing. Danger and Doom Play ping pong On my time table. Waiting, watching to see Who loses this game. I do not want to, nor do I "must have to know" more about this heavy gloom. Something is wrong What has yet to be revealed? --- What Is troubling me? I just know how gentle the wind feels Right before the torrents of rain fall. Ring phone, ring !.. Tell me who has scored higher In this game of table tennis... I know how it feels. When something is awry I know just how it feels When something is not right. Suspense keeps creeping up the back of my neck, making it stiff. Just another way life plays tricks On sensitive people's imminent grief.

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Vicki Acquah

Date: 6/27/2016 10:25:00 PM

seems my gut was right.. 7 months later the final blow... my healthy only daughter Feb 6 2016 has made her transition. She leaves 3 children ages 8 through 21. Her name was Kai Wingo...google her name and see how wonderful she is. :cause of death ."FASTING", and she lost her potassium! I am just now able to digest this.

Stephen Pennell

Date: 3/3/2016 9:07:00 AM

builds with suspense good write

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/25/2016 4:32:00 PM

So nice to read your poetry this evening, keep up the good work. Light & Love Debbie

Eric Boddie

Date: 8/10/2015 9:04:00 PM

I am as sensitive as it gets....mary keeps me paranoid but I throw no fits....I simply sit and observe so as to learn....sometimes it keeps me up all night, the imminent grief I have earn....

Vicki Acquah
Date: 5/17/2016 1:23:00 AM

Great comment

Vicki Acquah
Date: 8/12/2015 10:37:00 PM

Thanks for your very poetic reply ..lol "paranoid but I throw no fits". I like ..

Vicki Acquah

Date: 8/8/2015 3:55:00 AM

Turns out a best buddy was sick-Also turns out that my Issue's have issues... What I thought was a rattle in my car for potholes, turns out to be transmission problems. Which means no help to get fixed up. Issue being now that I do not have a car. I thought I should sell it. Turns out now the only key is now lost. Okay so there you have it- My Issues now have Issues.

Vicki Acquah
Date: 5/17/2016 1:28:00 AM

Now even later . My Only Daughter has fasted, lost her potassium and died after being onlife support got 7 days. I am totally grief stricken/ and my life has been a living he'll since. HER NAME WAS KAI Wingo Google her name and you will find out why she is such a great loss,not just to me,but to all of society.

Vicki Acquah
Date: 5/17/2016 1:28:00 AM

Kp Nunez

Date: 8/8/2015 3:21:00 AM

A deeply introspective write, Vicky. How've you been? hugs! Kim

Vicki Acquah
Date: 8/8/2015 3:48:00 AM

Thank you for stopping by to read and comment.

Vicki Acquah
Date: 8/8/2015 3:47:00 AM

Not as well as usual however when things have been "f i ne" for so long, I guess I can say I have had more good days than bad, Hopefully this storm shall pass and I can then renew my writing spirit.