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Immersed In Peaceful Thought

A beneficial mediation for the mind... being immersed in peaceful thought, seeing clouds drift towards sunset, imagining places pristine and wild. On a shining rock facing the breezy West, I lay whispering what comes naturally... to make a connection with the Almighty; I praise His creations being laid down to rest. Colors are lively images of the fading evening, the slower the ruddy sun reaches the horizon, the stronger the jasmines smell without repulsing... picturesque valley, tarry much longer and glisten. Feeling and looking happy and so serene inside, I breathe in and out to let gladness overwhelm me... looking in a certain direction with my glance of intensity to connect with the spectacular planets that seem to glide. Let this face glow without denying its deserved joy, let my contemplation carry me to the ends of infinity to bring back healing secrets Mankind never discovers... see me immersed in peaceful thought among marigolds!

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Date: 5/16/2011 12:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Andrew. Love,Carol
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Date: 5/14/2011 7:18:00 AM
Many congratulations Andrew on your win in Tahera's contest, have a lovely weekend....:)
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Date: 5/11/2011 9:50:00 AM
It's all about imagery in this wonderfully written poem. Congratulations! Gwendolen
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Date: 5/11/2011 6:18:00 AM
Congrats on your win Andrew .
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Date: 5/11/2011 5:27:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Tahera, Andrew
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Date: 5/11/2011 5:25:00 AM
Hey there Andrew, congrats on your win with this awesome write, I especially love your second stanza :)
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Date: 5/11/2011 5:19:00 AM
heavenly! triple cheers for your fine, fine win, andrew! :) huggs!
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Date: 5/11/2011 4:54:00 AM
Congrats Andrew on your wonderful win in the Yoga contest with this exciting adventure into meditation land.. awesome as always my friend..enjoy another victory luv..
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Date: 5/7/2011 1:48:00 AM
what a glorious piece swirling in my head, andrew.. is this for a contest?? winning's best!! :) huggs, nette
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