Immersed Freed Verse

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THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FREED VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment

IMMERSED so fascinating I recognise a participant existence engaged &critically alert & bewitched I love hearing the torrents of sound this sensorium throbbing in an array of art inundated by light so alluringly mystical experienced in this way, formal terms sensation & consciousness fused freestanding yet cascading merged in a detonation of colour saturated images of surreal dimension both spiritual both &sensual drama visual ebbs &flows to inaugurate sacrosanct rituals in liberation of the eye fantasy in experience in echo under immersive happenings dissolved into impressions

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