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When the northern star opens her gauzed veil On clouds’ ladder, winged pixies arise Where magic glides like a lucent trail, A parade I watch with angelic sighs. Glossy dust bounces on cosmic array To kindle thrills from a fancy dreamland As elves gather a rhapsodic play With choirs stylized by mystical wands. Jiggling lithe toes beyond stellar frames, More fays croon in my secret heaven Till youthful imaginings proclaim; I become Nyx of this orbit’s glen! Nyx--Goddess of Night Mystic Rose's Fantasy Contest 6/27/2015

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Date: 6/30/2015 6:23:00 PM
stunning win
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Date: 6/29/2015 1:45:00 PM
big congratulations, Nette, on your dreamy win.
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Date: 6/28/2015 5:07:00 PM
I do like watching the sky. We don't have that luxury so much these days with light pollution. It is fun to watch things happened behind the cloud curtain. Very imaginative and fun are you!
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Date: 6/28/2015 12:11:00 PM
Nice, dreamy verse here. Good luck in the contest1 Peace & Love Matthew Ansih
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Date: 6/28/2015 9:00:00 AM
Hello, my very dear friend Nette. I didn't visit the winning list yet 'cuz I just came in. After replying your comment on my poem, I directly came here and this is really superb! I know it's a great winning piece so my warm congrats! So sorry for not being around this week cuz of flu. Hope you're doing well. Tcare always! Thanks a lot! Many hugs, Leonora
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Date: 6/28/2015 12:22:00 AM
WOW, Nette, Congrats on the fantasy win...... SKAT
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Date: 6/27/2015 1:08:00 PM
I was just about to say how effervescent your poem is, only to see it win 1st prize on the ramp. Well, congratulations and here's to more awards!
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Date: 6/27/2015 11:35:00 AM
- Beautiful image ..... posted today ...... and 1st place in the contest only after a few minutes !!! - Bravo !!!!! - Congratulations, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/27/2015 7:55:00 AM
congrats on the win Nette, spellbinding write.
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Date: 6/27/2015 6:42:00 AM
You wave your wand of wonders, and fantasia springs from a dreamy pen! This to me is an eloquent poem!
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