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Imagine

Imagine The fog has settled Fantasy in a white cloak I see your image Teasing, whispering, laughing Reach out.. ghostly lips on mine

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/26/2009 3:12:00 PM

I really like the line "Fantasy in a white cloak" . Since you are using commas, perhaps, periods and semi colons would be useful too. Or is this way characteriztic of the type of poem? Light & Love Debbie Guzzi

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 11/25/2008 12:19:00 PM

Quite a read that captures the romantic side of the reader by placing them into the write to become not only the reader but a participant. Excellent again. Michael

Christopher Higgins

Date: 11/22/2008 12:45:00 PM

Lovely write Barbara. I love how you set this one up. The feel, mood, all work very well.Thanks for your words on my poem. Chris.

Nigel Fawcett

Date: 11/22/2008 12:19:00 PM

Wow, excellent passionate and romantic write, Barbara. I love Fantasy in a white cloak, brilliant. Lovely flow and use of form. Love, Nigel