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Imagination's Beacon

Clouds shroud the moon’s glow Light seeps through casting a spell Off to a new world Embrace visions born of night Before morning chases them Surrender your mind To the dreamy fantasies That debut at dusk Carrying us to toward the light Imagination’s beacon *Entry for Tracie’s “Moonlight Dreams” contest

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/6/2011 11:02:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "Moonlight Dreams" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 12/4/2011 4:35:00 PM

dreamy and beautiful visual, congrats carolyn!

Audrey Haick

Date: 12/4/2011 2:10:00 PM

Congratulations, Seafaress! Very lovely "Moonlight Dreams"...Wonderful imagination creates gems like this! Love, Annalise

Bob Quigley

Date: 12/4/2011 10:07:00 AM

Easy to see why this won. Great poem Carolyn. Congratulations

Bl Devnath

Date: 12/4/2011 3:47:00 AM

Congratulation on your fantastic win, my friend. bl

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/3/2011 7:17:00 PM

dreamy Caroline Congrad's dear! Light & Love

Joe Maverick

Date: 11/26/2011 11:11:00 AM

Best wishes Carolyn,, enjoyed this moon-light) write,,ha ha flows with metaphor's all shiny-bright, Gods Blessings:)

Kash Poet

Date: 11/24/2011 6:08:00 PM

Beautiful dreams under the moonlight.Best wishes Carolyn.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/24/2011 11:42:00 AM

a good dream poem here, Carolyn. Just wanted to say hello and wish you a happy thanksgiving before I go off for the day. Having my feast late this afternoon (new plan!) I hope you have a very enjoyable day with friends or family. Luv, Andrea ps love your avatar!

James Fraser

Date: 11/24/2011 10:00:00 AM

Imagination's Beacon sounds so adventurous Carolyn, nice line. Have a wonderful day. Currently here I'm taking one day at a time :)

Judy Ball

Date: 11/23/2011 2:53:00 PM

Very nice Caroloyn. Beautifullt expressed and well put together. God Bless, JB Glad my poem Words and Phrases was liked so well and it can do some good somewhere. God Bless :P

Jack Horne

Date: 11/23/2011 2:19:00 PM

Beautiful write, my friend. Love it

John Loving Iii

Date: 11/23/2011 4:10:00 AM

beautiful visions

Duncan Chappell

Date: 11/22/2011 9:23:00 PM

beautiful words here my dear carolyn ,now i hope you are doing very well ,im off back to rio de janeiro on the 24th december 2011 ,to be with my wonderful ceizar and our sons i cant wait i see your still putting down such wonderful poems for us all to see thank you love duncan and ceizar xxxx

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 11/22/2011 5:25:00 PM

So soft and lovely Carolyn, a perfect setting for a dream - how we poets adore these subjects and I love this one. Best wishes in the contest my dear, it can't help but be a winner.

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/22/2011 4:07:00 PM

You hit the nail right on the head! I love the transition from the moon into imagination! To me they really are as one...I love the moonlight and whenever I see a perfectly in the sky I tend to enter a state of imagination! Wonderful work!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/22/2011 3:05:00 PM

Enjoyed reading..Yes, those imagination fantasies are wonderful..Enjoyed reading..Wishing you luck in Tracie's contest..Reads lik winners' cirlce for sure..Thanks for the encouraging comments about my work..Sara

Tony Lane

Date: 11/22/2011 2:41:00 PM

I visit that land regularly. Good luck in the contest. Tony

Daver Austin

Date: 11/22/2011 2:27:00 PM

Imagination is the light come into one's mind, or consciousness. I like it - reminds me of Debussy's Claire de Lune. Love, daver

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 11/22/2011 1:06:00 PM

A nice a moonlight write.... on this rainy day here in ny... wishing you again a wonderful ThanksGiving love Michael