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Imaginary Contest Sponsor: Shadow Hamilton My Rainbow Paradise Baby flying rainbow unicorns soaring down by the bridge, they are called “Rainicorns” they display such fine courage. They battle with the mean Terasacus family almost every night, from evolution with deep red eyes and blue talons, ready to fight. This city in which we live resides inside the Rocky Mountains, for they are the color purple with rainbow colored fountains. We don't sleep at night because there is caffeine in the water, I just prance around with Flora, my rainbow colored daughter. Underneath the sidewalk made of rainbow crushed pottery, tunnels float from the north end where they play the lottery. Gambling is illegal so it's hush-hush between the city dwellers, you get caught, you take the flying rainbow and become interstellar. Anything green has no gravity, just float and hold on what they can, many trees, shrubs, and gramma's green wig float far from the land. Astrology lives in our neighborhood with Aries, Libra and Capricorn, they are cousins with the beautiful elegant baby Rainicorns. There's no such thing as clocks, for time doesn't even matter, there's a constant rainbow light aviation all the way from Saturn. We aren't carnivores or herbivores we just eat rainbow rocks, we don't ever wear a pair of tennis shoes, but wear rainbow socks. I am just giving you a sneak peek into my imaginary paradise, so cute and colorful, but lets keep it quiet, we don't like to advertise. What a graceful life we have full of vivacious colors high and low, the fantasy we live in was all started by the very first rainbow. Date Written: January 27, 2016

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Date: 2/2/2016 7:50:00 AM
A beautiful picture of a beautiful, colorful world is stuck in our eyes, with vivid memories in our minds!! Congrats Laura, for your placement in the contest!!! ;-)
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Date: 1/31/2016 12:27:00 PM
Laura, your poem is so full on imaginative imagery and a delight to read! Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/31/2016 12:50:00 PM
Thank you Sandra for your kind words, as always :) *smiles* -luloo
Date: 1/31/2016 10:05:00 AM
Awesome work !! No wonder it is in the winners’ list. Congrats..Sara
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Date: 1/31/2016 12:16:00 PM
thank you Sara :) *smiles* -luloo
Date: 1/31/2016 9:40:00 AM
absolutely delightful read LuLoo I would love to see a rainicorn congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/31/2016 12:11:00 PM
Thank you lovely Jan :) *smiles* -luloo
Date: 1/31/2016 8:53:00 AM
Laura, congratulations on your spectacular win!
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/31/2016 12:10:00 PM
Thank you very much Hansteven :) *Smiles* -luloo
Date: 1/31/2016 2:10:00 AM
Very much like a little girl's dream world. Congrats, Laura.
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Date: 1/31/2016 12:10:00 PM
Thank you lady Lin :) *Smiles* -luloo
Date: 1/30/2016 10:42:00 PM
Great Job Laura, Congrats!
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/31/2016 12:07:00 PM
Thank you sweet Edward! *smiles* -luloo
Date: 1/30/2016 8:24:00 PM
This poem is super imaginative Laura. I am sure she will love it. Your ending is perfect!
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Date: 1/30/2016 8:31:00 PM
Thank you very much Connie :) *smiles*-luloo
Date: 1/28/2016 12:43:00 PM
Congrat.Wonderful fancy bearing impressive creation of new worlds: What a graceful life we have full of vivacious colors high and low, the fantasy we live in was all started by the very first rainbow
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Date: 1/28/2016 1:30:00 PM
Thank you Ovidiu :) *smiles* -luloo
Date: 1/28/2016 5:17:00 AM
i delight in your sense if happiness where imagination truly resides, louloo!... darn good piece!.. .smiles and huggs
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/28/2016 8:21:00 AM
Thank you Nette :) *smile and hugs* to you also :)
Date: 1/27/2016 8:22:00 PM
It is indeed very creative and fun to read. Little girls never fully grow up do they?
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/28/2016 8:21:00 AM
nope I don't think they do Daniel! :) Thank you
Date: 1/27/2016 7:52:00 PM
Nice! Very upbeat and positive. Well said.
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/28/2016 8:20:00 AM
Thank you Louis :)

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