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I saw a cloud; a big cloud. It looked like a white temple; an abode for people who have seen and tasted the light of peace and harmony. “If I am able to reach the cloud temple and knock on its doors, will it open? Who will I see?” I whispered to my self. Date: 27/1/2016

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Date: 2/16/2016 10:32:00 PM
Teddy, thank you for supporting my comment. That was nice of you. Love LINDA
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Date: 2/6/2016 1:37:00 AM
Teddy Congratulations on your fantastic win. Love LINDA
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/8/2016 6:47:00 AM
Thank you so much Linda! :-)
Date: 2/2/2016 3:15:00 PM
Good poem Teddy. I love the question you asked yourself in the ending.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/4/2016 5:54:00 AM
Thanks James! :-) I love writing poems that also make one to question, apart from just reading a narrative or musings....
Date: 2/2/2016 2:44:00 PM
Congratulations Teddy, on your winning entry!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/4/2016 5:47:00 AM
Thank you very much Connie! *^_^*
Date: 2/1/2016 3:26:00 PM
Teddy, Congratulations on your win. SKAT
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/2/2016 5:12:00 AM
Thank you so much Skat! *^_^*
Date: 1/31/2016 10:08:00 AM
Awesome work !! No wonder it is in the winners’ list. Congrats..Sara
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/2/2016 5:10:00 AM
Hi Sara. Thank you for your kind applause! *^_^*
Date: 1/31/2016 9:43:00 AM
many congrats Teddy:-) hugs Jan xx
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/2/2016 5:08:00 AM
Thank you so much Jan! *^_^*
Date: 1/31/2016 8:54:00 AM
Teddy, congratulations on your spectacular win!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/2/2016 5:07:00 AM
Thanks Hansteven! ;-)
Date: 1/31/2016 5:39:00 AM
well done and congrats, Teddy.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/2/2016 5:06:00 AM
Thank you so much Lin! *^_^*

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