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For Shadow Hamilton's Imagination contest.

A muddy toad 'ribbits,'   before leaping away - to which I ponder, if fairy tales were true, who's 'Prince Charming.' would you be? I smile, in the quiet pond's reflection. I can see fading green leaves falling, as petals wilt from red to rust. Soft gold sunbeams caress ripples, like little Autumnal whispers from nature's story of seasonal growth. Bare branches reach for the sky, full of empty nests and bird feeders. Lost in thought... I wonder who knows their secrets and where does the queen bee hibernate... Colours of time nonchalantly drift by, as daylight fades into clementine hues. I bid kaleidoscopic Koi goodbye, who pop to the surface with their 'gaping' motions, hoping for food. Chill winds weave into indigo air, floating through misty meadows - crow caws can be heard from a distance. Sky slowly forms sparkling spotlights in a clear black backdrop, where the whole of the moon is visible. The toad returns, now clean and shimmering, but still no crown upon his slimy head. We both sit and gaze in silence, as stars shape into different forms. I connect them like dots, so many patterns appear - a dove, an angel, a face. "Hey prince of toads can you see the unicorn?" I ask, before a flash of light bursts like a firework, but all I get in return is a "ribbit." Maybe he agreed, maybe he laughed, maybe it was a profound message - but we shared an air of magic that night.

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Date: 2/1/2024 2:47:00 AM
What a lovely poem really engaging! Congratulations on your placement in the contest!
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Date: 1/31/2024 3:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! I found humor, right away, and the Cranberries? Yes! I feel this one is best, in my little humble opinion. :D I Am
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Silent One
Date: 1/31/2024 3:55:00 PM
Thank you...You are very kind to say
Date: 1/27/2024 5:40:00 AM
An enchanting story, SO: Your imagery is superb. A wonderful fantasy that feels real. Good Luck in the contest. SuZ
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Date: 1/25/2024 12:35:00 PM
Sounds like a very pleasant day, evening and night. I don't know too many people willing to relax and take in a scene for several hours. The poem is a meditation and reminds me how beautiful this world can be.
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Date: 1/25/2024 7:46:00 AM
Love this journey you take us on , this is very captivating and enjoyable to read , glad you chose to not be the silent one in your poems : )
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Date: 1/24/2024 4:14:00 PM
a magnificent creation, Silent One. Your poem seemed magical while being profound. I especially liked: Lost in thought...I wonder who knows their secrets...those words add a bit of mystery and intrigue and captivated me.
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Date: 1/24/2024 12:03:00 AM
great inspiration, i like too be connected with animals even toads, thanks for the e excellency, enjoyed your creative and remarkable poem
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Date: 1/23/2024 6:06:00 PM
It may be imagination, or a gentle fall to winter evening by the pond. Either way, I like what you had to say ... and the frog's reply. :-) Good luck in the contest, Silent One. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 1/23/2024 4:15:00 PM
You tell an enchanting story Silent, I enjoyed the read, Well penned
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Date: 1/23/2024 3:32:00 PM
Wow this is excellent. I enjoyed reading this. I like how you ended it too :)
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Date: 1/23/2024 3:29:00 PM
Delightful, thoughtful, delicious write! :)
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Date: 1/23/2024 3:29:00 PM
Maybe he agreed, maybe he laughed, maybe it was a profound message - I choose to believe in a magical toad spouting wisdom.
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Date: 1/23/2024 3:02:00 PM
Another world of possibility in this reflection pool. The toad held his tongue, accept for in his advantage, snacking on deliciousness before him. You see, the stars are like lilys in a pond, touchstone paths to the beyond... "I am a Prince ! ...and who else is experiencing this with you ? and who is this Prince Charming?! Charming, Silent One. (Pronounced, trumpet announced, in the gauqelin sector next to Pegasus, a crown. the stars playing koi in this reflection of profound, whim of reknown)
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Date: 1/23/2024 1:47:00 PM
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Date: 1/23/2024 12:08:00 PM
--Colors of time nonchalantly drift by, as daylight fades into clementine hues---Chill winds weave into indigo air, floating through misty meadows -crow caws can be heard from a distance--very articulate writing, SO. Enjoyed the ride on wings of imagination.
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Date: 1/23/2024 11:51:00 AM
Beautiful your relationship to nature is very special SO,Kelli
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Date: 1/23/2024 11:40:00 AM
Love the opening verse with its question…as daylight fades into clementine hues. I bid kaleidoscopic Koi goodbye… but still no crown upon his slimy head. We both sit and gaze in silence…love the six verses at end…Overall great poem! Kept my interest! It made me smile. A fave.
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Date: 1/23/2024 10:58:00 AM
- Yes, I believe it was a magical moment you shared in silence ... if you had stayed there a little longer you would have seen that he was a prince ... of course :) - A lovely poem, my friend :) - hugs
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Date: 1/23/2024 10:51:00 AM
Well you convey a lot for 'a silent one' which is Although a pun..' A respectful one.! Nonetheless Lest i digress, I'll enjoyed this scene I sah.'
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Date: 1/23/2024 9:49:00 AM
Your poem revolves perfectly around the theme of nature and magic, exploring the beauty and mystery of the natural world. Your use of vivid and descriptive language creates imagery that brings the natural world to life. Words like "fading green leaves," "petals wilt from red to rust," "soft gold sunbeams," and "kaleidoscopic Koi" paint a rich picture of the surroundings. My very best wishes for the contest
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Date: 1/23/2024 9:38:00 AM
Woahh, dear Silent One, I felt as living in this poem as a character, gosh, your storytelling is absolutely stellar! This should be a magical tale in a storybook, it's so profound with meaningful depth..So beautifully and intricately you've crafted every scene, keeping in mind the flow of words and how every line should intrigue the reader's heart..Ahh, this is just a poetic treat for me, this brought waves of imagination in my mind, so alive and mystical..I remember coco bunny and now this, wow
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Date: 1/23/2024 9:40:00 AM
That opening and the ending, absolutely out of a fairytale and also "I connect them like dots,so many patterns appear -a dove, an angel, a face" How serene and ethereal.. I feel a pure innocence there, so beautiful and heartfelt. Loved reading this, a FAV for sure, keep writing and inspiring! :)
Date: 1/23/2024 9:13:00 AM
your poems are sublime silent one. i always get lost in your words. i enjoy reading them a lot. they're so nicely written. addictive, we could say.
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Date: 1/23/2024 8:41:00 AM
How magical and mystical is this poem dear silent one. I absolutely love your use of colors and adjectives to paint imagery as well as the the very imaginative nature of your storytelling here truly stood out for me! Im in awe inspired to do this too! My most favorite part of this poem is the ending! I laughed too at the magical scene along with the characters and i saw through your words stars forming into various shapes flying across the sky, and the unicorn! Is just so artistic of you!
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Date: 1/23/2024 8:42:00 AM
“ Maybe he agreed, maybe he laughed, maybe it was a profound message - but we shared an air of magic that night.” What an. Intriguing and unique ending! You can write on any theme any form any prompt and leave me impressed! Just impeccable! This is a fave for me. Best wishes for the contest

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