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I fell asleep in a wondrous glen that seemed so full of sparkly things Trees here, over there a unicorn what? Yes a unicorn perched on a grassy rock I looked at it, it too looked at me I say how do you do? well ty. how do you? Fine I reply. but why are you here? I am your guide between our worlds my name is pukka and first we go to the high priest's hall where all is decided So together they set off passing trees shaped like crocks, elephants and birds Most would talk to them of scandalous things but Pukka rushed him past then they were there. what do you think we should do with the thief Simba they asked Peg him out in the desert for one night let the animal's decided his fate and so that was what happened and entered into the good book as the punishment Right best be bustling along right fast in a flash they were back in the glen Simba rubbed his eyes in disbelief Pukka had vanished all seem the same Simba found some sparkly hairs call me if you need me

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Date: 1/19/2024 8:15:00 AM
A delightful read.
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Date: 1/16/2024 4:17:00 PM
Sparkly, vibrant and filled with beautiful childlike perspective. Totally enjoyed the read. Health and Happiness! Lonna
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 1/17/2024 7:11:00 AM
you get it for sure all returned to you hugs Shadow
Date: 1/16/2024 1:23:00 PM
this is So fun, Shadow. Love the characters your imagination created.
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 1/17/2024 7:09:00 AM
ty Andrea good to see you and know that sparkle is sill with you hugs sweet lady Shadow
Date: 1/15/2024 4:38:00 PM
Isn't imagination fun? I think so. I enjoyed your light poem, Shadow, thanks for sharing. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 1/17/2024 7:05:00 AM
lots of fun Bill and we should use more of it hugs Shadow
Date: 1/13/2024 4:03:00 PM
I love the whimsical and mystical nature of this poem...what an imagination you have, dear Shadow! I wonder if there's a hidden message in your words -- the journey to the high priest's hall??? Pukka and Peg. I like them. Hope you're feeling okay. Thinking of you and wishing you well, hugs, Sara
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 1/14/2024 9:30:00 AM
it will be another 3weeks before I know for sure and maybe a small op on my iris. At least they can't take my mind lol who knows maybe maybe not hugs Shadow
Date: 1/13/2024 11:05:00 AM
Hey hope you feeling ok.. Your poem is a delightful venture into the realms of dreams and fantasy. The wondrous glen you describe, filled with sparkly things and unexpected creatures like the unicorn, creates a vivid and enchanting backdrop. The conversation between the dreamer and Pukka, the guide between worlds, adds a layer of mystery and purpose to the dream. The journey to the high priest's hall, with trees taking various whimsical shapes, adds a touch of surrealism.
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 1/14/2024 9:18:00 AM
slowly getting there SO ty for asking as to the poem i have a better one on soup darn if I can remember what I called it hugs Shadow

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