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Image - Violence

IMAGE VIOLENCE An unreasoning factor In that image and A shot still ringing! Lines of people running Walking Shouting! An image in space Given lasting life Over hours days years! An image With lines from the past Giving added color charging! Dave Austin

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/24/2016 5:43:00 PM

yes, and the effects of this type of violence linger for the rest of one's life. WEll said, DAver, Can't believe I ever missed this one!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/7/2016 7:25:00 AM

What inspired your write .. I feel we are all equal. Epic.... Linda

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/2/2016 6:43:00 PM

Love it, cats got my tongue, just I love it.

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 9/29/2016 8:04:00 AM

"unreasoning factor", Daver, as in irrational, illogical, aberrant, absurd? A spooky puzzle of phantoms and ghouls; A crucial piece missing...the why? You never mentioned being a " Who you gonna call, Ghostbuster", Daver? :) Envy, jealousy, greed; will forever make cruel and mindless playmates. Happy Halloween! Love you, with hugs, Mikki

Michelle Mac Donald
Date: 9/30/2016 8:15:00 AM

Sorry about the verbal diarrhea, Daver. I do very much enjoy this write! Masterfully of intriguing; the format gives it more of an edge, But I didn't mean to jump over it.:( Keep well, best wishes with hugs, love, Mikki

Daver Austin
Date: 9/29/2016 11:59:00 AM

I like your words better than mine, dear Mikki. Your comment is better poetry than mine, yet you hold back. Love you back with hugs. Old daver

Wendy Rycroft

Date: 9/27/2016 1:20:00 AM

Left an impression and image making one think x Well done x

Daver Austin
Date: 9/27/2016 11:34:00 AM

Thanks for the visit, Wendy. Love, daver