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"i'M Your Pillow"

When your eyes close at night do you know I'm not far.. Do you dream in flight like on a Ferris wheel up in a star.. Are your pillows clouds that comfort you like a babies cradle.. Do they soothe your sleep or stir you mind like soup from a ladle... Do you see my eyes covering you and absorbing your beauty like dessert... Taking your soul as you lay and rest and keeping it from getting hurt... I'm your angel during the night and your devil when its right... But always protect you from the bad, and promise never to make you sad...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/17/2010 4:47:00 AM
nice poem,thxz 4 the comment btw
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Date: 7/3/2010 11:53:00 AM
That awesome pillow line got me good Michael.. so powserful to the whole piece.. just great analogies and parallels too.. emotional write.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in AlohA Land...
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Date: 7/3/2010 7:20:00 AM
Another beauty.. You have the ability to comfort with your words - Wilma sm btw
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Date: 7/2/2010 4:51:00 PM
You ARE an angel, Michael. You offer such comfort to those of us who long for true love. God bless you, my friend. This is a beautiful poem! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/2/2010 4:14:00 PM
Great romantic write...The lucky lady in your life would love this one..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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Date: 7/2/2010 3:50:00 PM
Nice read Michael sarah x
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