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I'M Writing You Off

We're done for now I hope you see. You're left field antics aren't for me. The more you write the more I'm bored. I truly do not understand, Good Lord! The more I think, the more I feel. What we have shared does not feel real. When egos' search for reassurance. You better have some good insurance. The time has come and now we're through. I'd get on with it if I were you. For P. D.'s I'm breaking up with you contest. Love you P. D. :)

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Date: 8/30/2014 12:15:00 PM
Well, dog gone it... and I thought surely it would last ... hahahahha, and you know I'm kidding... Excellent !!! Belated congrats on this marvelous win !!!
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Date: 6/22/2014 1:22:00 PM
Congrats on your great win!!!!!
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Date: 6/20/2014 5:50:00 PM
Robert, Congratulations..... Awesome break-up poem.... Love ~SKAT~
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Date: 6/19/2014 11:45:00 PM
Wow an amazing write Robert ! Congrats on great win ,, yes when who's clash ,, better take off !
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Date: 6/19/2014 7:08:00 PM
Excellent write and win Robert. Big congrats!
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Date: 6/19/2014 6:08:00 PM
Love that "when ego's search for reassurance you better have some good insurance" so unique and creative, I dig your poem grats on your win :)
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Date: 6/19/2014 7:03:00 AM
Congratulations, Robert, on a well-deserved, big win! Excellent write! Warm regards.
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Date: 6/19/2014 6:41:00 AM
Congrats on a great win, Robert!.. The title could have won on its own. Very clever!!.. Hugs. Arlene
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Date: 6/19/2014 6:38:00 AM
Congratulations on a fine win in Breaking up contest, robert
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Date: 6/19/2014 12:50:00 AM
this was Awesome Robert. lol... Writing me off,,, you can't do it just yet...LOL, I need my rhyming comments, back...:) .. Congratulations, and thank you so much for enjoying, my contest. I enjoyed every poem, on my Breaking up contest. I can sit here, and say I truly enjoyed every entry, even the few that chose not to follow my rules... LOL, Love LINDA
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Date: 6/18/2014 11:21:00 PM
I love that title, very clever!.... You did a great job with the contest theme, Robert. Good luck to you!
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Date: 6/16/2014 3:08:00 PM
WELL DONE, my friend. You an artist at breaking up. haha.
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Date: 6/15/2014 7:41:00 PM
Nice one Robert...I think it needs to be less than 10 lines
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Date: 6/15/2014 7:09:00 PM
This is an excellent way to do the breaking up clean and bloodless! Great write, Robert!
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