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I'M Waiting For the Sunset

I'm Waiting For The Sunset A soft breeze makes me feel alive As I walk the weather beaten path To the lonely hills This isn't the life I lived before For I am something new and something fresh An icy glass of refreshing water A bird hops along the ground Its wing is broken and its eyes are empty A shadow of glory Finally I rest on the hill And finally I can hear over the sound Of my frantic heart beat A soft breeze makes me feel alive As I watch the sun walk the weather beaten path To the lonely hills

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Date: 10/15/2009 4:55:00 PM
Interesting perspective. Nice use of imagery. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent here. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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