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I'm so confused

I guess I’m a winner because no confusion I’m losing
With no prized to gain while she did the choosing
To the decision she made that got me confusing

I’m told I’m the best and other choices are down
To take my place I’ll have to drop my crown
But why look for less, when the best is found

What do you want, you don’t have a clue
You want me in your life but not to love you
To make life easier, you say your heart’s through
If a mistake was made, my heart will love you

What’s the point of reviving when I was just kilt 
The cow can no longer moo over spilt milk
I’m going to shine on my own and help failures sprout
But why the clock still ticks when the time ran out?

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  1. Date: 3/10/2013 2:34:00 PM
    I like the Rhyme, you got mad skill!