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I'M Nobody

If I had dominion over yesterday I would've love to see it once again But I'm powerless like war armed battalion Captured by their enemy in the war front. If I had control over tomorrow I would've appreciate it today more Before I seize to exist or I may, Lost sight of beauty before it comes. If I had ascendancy over today, I would've caused it to become tomorrow And see how beautiful it's colors will look like. perhaps, how unfortunate it's appearance will be. To the mover of the inmover I bow The pontiff has reserved this to Himself The world of technology is challenged And a world richest cannot pay.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/6/2016 1:38:00 AM

Tyokosu Aondohemba,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Tyokosu Aondohemba
Date: 8/6/2016 4:45:00 AM

Continue Thereafter, the ego that was built in developing music lyrics has transferred to poetic writing. The ideas or inspirations of the poems I ink on the pages of paper so far, I slept to wake up with them the following morning. I had just forty six of them so far. Thanks @ Linda.

Tyokosu Aondohemba
Date: 8/6/2016 4:44:00 AM

Finding oneself in a new society requires adaptation to suit the culture of such society. Poetry Soup is a place I long for and I'm pleased to be called a poet of this community. My poetic thoughts emanated through several stages, beginning from church choir to music world. Although I parked the career by the side even with number of good songs composed. It was demanding of other things against my spiritual life and had no option than to quite.

Skat A

Date: 8/4/2016 4:22:00 PM

Tyokosu, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**

Tyokosu Aondohemba
Date: 8/4/2016 10:58:00 PM

@ SKAT I'm pleased to be a member of poetry soup; although, I'm not an up bringing of this class of thought. Learning to swim must be in a pool is the philosophical believe that propelled me to step in-house. I'm more at home with quantitative but still want to view the other side of the coin. I appreciate your words of encouragement. **Tyokosu**