I'M Lost

I'm a song Written in free verse By a poet A poet with no words I'm a soul Blowin' with the hurricane Like a teardrop Saltier than rain I'm a phrase With no meaning as such In a language That ain't used by much In the end When everyone's heading home I'm lost In a place where gypsies roam

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Chandru Ganesh S

Date: 3/30/2009 4:55:00 AM

The form is great. I longed for some more lines with indepth contexts.. good one. Thanks for your comment on my poetry "Am I an idiot".

L'Nass Shango

Date: 3/30/2009 12:18:00 AM

You have captured the meter of the lyrical in a beautiful form and given it a very universal subject with beautiful images, great write, thanks for comments. Love and happiness always, friend.