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I'M Losing It

I'm losing the faces, I'm losing the names Quit toying with me, quit playing games My had spins faster than ever before As I try to decide if I should open the door I lose sense of direction, I lose sense of smell I can't see a thing when I'm under your spell But no, I need to focus, I need to stay here Do not surrender, though he is near My hands are now shaking, I'm trying to hide The things I wish I didn't feel inside I smile my smile when you smile yours But It's a scary feeling- Knowing for me you'd get down on all fours Please, just don't. Don't flatter me so you love more about me than I even know Your eyes intrigue me and I'm lost in them Like the deepest lake, the glossiest gem I'm losing it all, except for you And if I did, I don't know what I would do

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/2/2011 10:04:00 PM
Oh!... I hope you won't be upset? I named one of my poems this that I wrote today.I didn't even realize you already wrote this.But I just named it "Losing It" Oopps! I'll change it if I can think of another name?
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J. Dover
Date: 12/3/2011 8:36:00 PM
Don't even worry about it! Songs have the same name, right? Why can't poems? And anyways, they're not exactly the same :) Now I'll have to go check out yours... great minds DO think alike, Dan. Love, J.

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