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I'm Losing It

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I'm Losing It

I’m losing it
This life in a prism drains
Every place I turn
 A new face to show
I’m losing it
The sense of who I am
I spin in circles
Being who they need me to be
I’m losing it
Remembering that once
I was true
That I showed you
I’m losing it
What I was
Even though I knew 
You would see a monster
But you were the same
To my surprise
I’m losing it
You treated me 
As a kind companion
Not a circus spectacle
Not as I deserved, even
As I dreamed, perhaps
And I’m losing it

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  1. Date: 11/7/2010 4:08:00 PM
    very strong write here my friend

  1. Date: 2/15/2010 10:54:00 AM
    wow i am really shocked to be your first comment on this one, especially since it is so relatable. i loved it and i think we all feel this way, well i know i do! i just loved this poem so keep writing em! =)jo