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I'M Letting the Burden Go

No longer will I tread so gingerly across the glass I'm forgiving myself for any mistakes in the past I will not live my life for the sake of your peace of mind I'm letting the burden go, I'm leaving it behind I will love who I am and the mother I have come to be I'm releasing this pattern, I don't like what I see I can't carry blame for all of the pain that you feel I am living my life and that's what is real I must have been terrible, for you surely let me know But I am forgiving myself, I'm letting the burden go

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Date: 2/7/2020 3:51:00 PM
Once you learn to let things go, life becomes a lot easier. Once something has passed. Move on!
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Date: 3/1/2015 2:20:00 PM
Third line doesn't need the comma. You have 'surly' where you may intend 'surely'. I like the piece and say you have expressed the situation quite well. Sincerely, Nick
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Anna Hopper
Date: 3/4/2015 7:30:00 AM
Thank you

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